Poetry Competition

Here is a selection of poems entered into the poetry competition, which ran from 15th to 20th June 2015.

The challenge was to translate the final image in the translation chain of ‘Still’ by Domingo Martínez back into poetry. We were looking for a translation of the image, which would also be as close as possible to Denise Riley’s original poem, which was only unveiled to participants after the deadline.

Below are the original poem and Domingo’s translation. Enjoy reading the excellent entries we received and comparing them to the two works. The competition was judged by Ricarda and Maria-José together with Bryan Eccleshall, Katarina Kelsey, Sharon Kivland, Domingo Martínez, Denise Riley and Sam Treadaway. This was by no means easy nor was it a unanimous decision, but we did arrive at a clear winner: The poem by Danielle Emtage.

Still FINAL D Riley

Darkness, blur and an arm in blue, green and red colours.  Fear, suspicion and fragility.  I perceive Susan’s image as a metaphor of wish and desire, but also of nostalgia and melancholy. The hand awaiting for someone or for something to hold, or maybe just to be held.  When I first saw it, it remind me to a photograph I bought in a flea market. In it I could see an arm with the same view and a hand holding a child’s hand.  I took that piece of the picture and drew it separately. That allowed me to express my own feelings through it.  Then I reproduced the atmosphere in Susan’s picture, which I find very suggestive and close to the nostalgic feeling I wanted to show. It is an feeling linked to a memory.  Please, keep holding my hand as you used to do when I was a child.  I now hold that memory as it is about to drop, to vanish.  When you held my hand I felt safe and secure; it was like walking along the right path.  If your hand loses strength, everything becomes dark and blurred. Just some light let me see the path. 

Domingo Martínez, ‘no title’, found object, pencil drawing and digital collage, 2015

Danielle Emtage

The soul draws breath – hold – release.
A memory spent. Reflect. Unease
your hand from the hold on your heart in the heat
of the moment.

Pause.

The hand draws out. A photograph.
A memory found, all too hard
is the hold of the hand on the heart in the heat
of the moment.

Reflect.

Still is the night, rage is the soul.
Pain is the shape of the hole in my whole.
The heart in the hold of the hand is a fix –
temporary treatment for an infinite mix
of blue and of red, of ice that I bled,
of hell that I cried while wishing the dead
were alive.

Still is the night and still I cannot.
Neither can X nor Y nor God.

Still is the night, and still must my soul
be still, learn to relinquish the hold.

Translator’s Note:
I chose to focus on an overall emotional response to the image, attempting to evoke with the poem a similar response in a reader as the image did in me. Some physical details including objects and colour were taken as literally as they were presented, with context being inferred and imagined.

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Robin Bothroyd

WRIST

today could be about the word ‘wrist’
wrist silent double-u silent whisper
the way the sound wrist echoes
risk is each wrist doubled
you ask have you ever
seen the dark turn
orange neon
purple or
wrists
or purple
neon orange
turn the dark seen
have you ever you ask
is each wrist doubled risk
the way the sound wrist echoes
silent whisper silent double-u wrist
could ‘wrist’ be about the word today

Translator’s Note:
Here is an explanation of the process that brought about this poem. I wrote down my first impressions of the artwork – orange neon, wrists – before sculpting them into a triangular form, with the second half a blurred reflection of the first. The poem became an arrow pointing to the word ‘wrists’, just as the artwork is an arm pointing to an image. The artwork had been ‘translated’ into a poetic form.

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Madeleine Walton

I am transported back
To that room
A room with a view

Two windows frame the view
Trees silhouetted against the skyline
With an indigo sky

Silver birch trees
Within and without
The bark highlighted by moonlight

Stark drawings on white paper
Piercing the dark exterior
With three drawn hands

Hands reaching out
A parent and child
Hand in hand

A silvery blue leaf
Masquerading
As a Fairy

Memories of childhood abound
Lucky clover
Bunches of honesty

Exterior becomes interior
Loneliness
Lies heavy

Beyond the trees
Hope lies
Somewhere

Translation note: after enlarging the image and studying it I wrote down everything I could see and my thoughts. I then arranged and expanded those words into a poem.

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Anna Mace

The Tale of Illusion

Will you give me your hand?
I hold it tight,
Pressed up hard
against this night,
I am this; midnight blue,
engorged delight,
Shadows mutter, deny
deceiving the timid light.

The trees dream things
they cannot see,
Beyond the far-slaked
and ghostly chimneys,
And wristed clenched
your hand I cannot free,
Like these fluttering,
cerulean-lit memories;

Childhood gazing,
such thoughtful stance,
Our fires of future hopes
stoked and balance,
Curl, rise above Tyche’s stage
upon this we chance,
This scene will pass
whilst we still dance.

Your hand grips me in fear, (like teeth
clenched against the dark),
We surrender our turn, (as light will turn),
let intention make her mark.

Process
The evocative image, No title by Domingo Martínez (2015) suggested a number of different narratives to me.  It is a wonderfully rich image to translate into words; set against a staged backdrop with its dramatic upward lighting.
The relationship of the people in the left hand corner leads your eye upward towards the image of the relationship of the hands in the top right hand corner.  And the hands are so prominent in the image, both clenched and gently clasping, connecting all parts of the image as a whole.  It reminded me of Rumi’s poem, When I See You, and freedom from his ‘secret self’.  All together this started a dialogue for me, ultimately resulting in this poem I named, The Tale of Illusion.

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Selina Parmar

Humans like to hold on to things;
Memories especially – photos take us back to simpler times.
We also like things that are more present
like a person, a lover, a friend, a relative.
We hold on so tight,
fearing their absence more than anything.
But we must accept the inevitable impermanence of everything.
Trees lose their leaves
and birds lose their feathers.
Let’s just enjoy being together.

Translator’s note
I interpreted the image to be about holding on because of the focus on hands– one gripping the other and one holding a photo. But the trees surrounding the pencil drawings create a juxtaposition of holding on and letting go, because whilst the humans are trying to hold onto things, trees lose their leaves all the time. Thus my poem is about enjoying the moment but accepting that you can’t hold on to things forever.

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Sophie Heatley

Worthless are hands, with nothing to hold,
Empty, useless, yielding to cold,
Even the unborn child reaches out,
Pressed fingertips against red iron mould.
For what better sensation is there,
Than the warmth of another’s touch?
Anchor of flesh, a stronger grip so rare,
Man’s gravity to another, two towers in prayer.

Translators note:
In my poem, I try to capture the importance of human contact. The image of the hand gripping a wrist made me think about our urgent need to be with people and how this is instinctive. I tried to create this image with the idea of an unborn child, already trying to reach out in the womb for another hand to hold. There is no stronger bond than that which can be felt between two people. 

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John Oswald

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The hither and thither side of a window
As the light of a notepad unframed
Are first subject to the light
Of hithering or thithering.

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Notebook paper is still as a tree as
Treated timber is still as a tree:
Examples of derivation.

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The hand with which the wood is treated
Or with which the pencil is applied are
Still as hands with which we have held.

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Translator’s note
First wish to typographically recreate the leftward-downward trajectory of the image. I have relied on ‘as’ to translate the analogical aspects of the image: the touching of the paper and of the drawn hands, paper and wood, timber and wood, window frame and notepaper.
I try to use ‘as’ to articulate the tension between interconnectedness and the necessity of framing interconnectedness — a strategy often deployed by Wallace Stevens.

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Nick Wilson

Hand Me Downs

After you’ve had your fill,
You hand me down your past.
Trapped by this armory of ideas,
Escape is nonetheless inevitable.
Crossing margins; edgeless; timeless;
New landscapes forged through
Wordless rituals of creation.

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After you’ve had your fill,
You hand me down your present.
Fatherly protection or living manacle?
Vice-like; thickly unyielding;
Unwilling now to let go into that
Soft release that welcomes,
One-by-one, my unfolding digits.[/column]

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 After you’ve had your fill,
You hand me down your future.
Cold image upon cold image;
Accumulated simulacra; reproductions;
Yet oblivious ‘still’ to nature’s hidden toll.
What then of this second-hand world?
Should we be more grateful?

Notes on translation:
The poem translates a tension between ‘still’ and its absence: dis-ease over our inherited ‘second-hand’ world of ideas (& creativity) (v.1), life chances (v.2) and nature (v.3). Visual cues include ‘God’s hand’ stretched over pages, clasped hands, blue (cold) and red (hot) lighting on trees and dark background (global warming). Reference to past, present and future echoes media employed (from pencil and paper to ‘digit’-al). The poem is read from left to right, mirroring my reading of the image itself.

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Molly De Dios Fisher

Our Hands

“My hand
Which learnt from my mother’s hand
And my husband’s hand
And the hands on the clock
That tick away
Making me more tentative with every touch
Knows more than your hand,
Dear child,
Your Innocent hand,
A hand not yet programmed
Not to touch what you do not understand.

I do it because I care
Because I love you
My darling
And as you do not listen I must hold you back,
Protect you from the earth
As my mother held me back from the fire.

The elements, my darling, are dangerous
things.
Trust me.”

“But mamma
Let me breath
Let me live
Let my fly
A life cooped up, scared
Is not a life but a lie
Dad’s i-pad is boring
I’ve played all the games
After hours and hours
They all seem the same

How can I know if that leaf is no good?
When that stiff white lettuce
Fresh in from Tesco
You feed me as food.

Let me get down and dirty
Let me have fun
Role around in the mud
Skip, jump, run
Get a bit hurt
Cuts and bruises galore

Toughen me up
And I’ll be ready for more
What about the stories
That Auntie Deidre told
About how your parents turfed you outside
Be it hot be it cold
Only to come home for tea time and bed
The day of adventures spinning around  Inside your head.

What about the story
From when you were nine-years-old
And the field full of cows
Chased you onto the road
And what about the time you played by the brook
And the tree swing broke
And Jack Bullard fell with a splash
And you all got soaked

It all sounds so fun
‘The good old days’ as you say
So why won’t you let me
Go outside and play”

“My darling,
I am linked to you in ways that you could not
possibly understand.

When I hold you back
When I grasp your hand
It is the chord
That can never be cut
Because
Just as I once was to you,
You are now to me
My oxygen, my blood supply, my energy.
One day you will be old enough
Spread your wide wings,
Breath. Live. Fly.
Fly from the nest high into the sky.
And then when you have kids of your own
You can let them skip, jump, run
But for now times have changed
Trust me on this, my darling son.”

Translator’s note
The dominant hand on the sketch is wearing a wedding ring and a watch, which I have interpreted as the hands of a modern day married mother holding her son’s hands back from the leaf, imitating her own mother’s actions. The younger generation seems blander with more rules restricting children from going out and discovering even the most harmless things. Just as the mother has the dominant voice in the image and I gave her the strongest voice in the poem.

Notes
Different tone for mother and child. Child voice inspired by Doctor Seusse

Never been a mother or young boy. Risk not having believable voices, but wanted to use the dialogue to convey ideas.

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Julia Schiefer

Photographic memory

Translator’s Note:
I was thinking of this kind of experience of an existence in which you have your memories in several pieces of papers which form a kind of holistic whole, that is an image. Also, I was wondering, how this perfect image is actually just a part of what is out there. How you would make sense of the world.